2013年4月14日 星期日

Correction

1. Soft ware→software
2. retouching soft wares.→Change into a word which is easy to understand
3. Since more and more applications had showed up with the large number of SMART-PHONE-USERS using the mobile phones," 
4. Subtitle also should be easier to understand
5. "According to the survey, most applications "WHICH" have been downloaded are games"
6. Through this, we can see that the needs of applications are mostly based on entertainment and “FEATURE WHICH is really easy to kill time."
7. focus more on→ FOCUS ON
8. use the present tense
9. Unlike Taiwan→DIFFERENT FROM TAIWAN
10. Taiwan's users have been restricted by the communication softwares(Download the apps not for app but the additional function)
11. Compare with the ranking(throw the questionnaire away)
12. The last part need to be revise all
13. Above all, free and interesting game"S"
14. Application turns in to app
15. Have more view in the app part

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